Assignment: Improving a Paper 2 for Highest Marks

IB HIST OF AMERICAS HL YR 2-B
2022-11-16T17:27:53Z

Due: Feb 7, 2023 by 11:59pm

Look again at the mark scheme and student answers on the previous pages in the module. Also consider the examiner's comments and feedback. Now choose ONE of the three examples, and try to write a few extra paragraphs to push the answer into the highest band (13-15). As well as making sure you address all aspects of the question, try to integrate some references to relevant historians/historical interpretations.

TIP: Copy and paste example question and the student answer you want to work on. Then, highlight your added sentences and paragraphs where appropriate, so I can see if you added either to existing paragraphs, and/or added completely new ones. Please do not use a faint highlighting color option as it is difficult to see.

Look again at the mark scheme and student answers on the previous pages in the module. Also consider the examiner's comments and feedback. Now choose ONE of the three examples, and try to write a few extra paragraphs to push the answer into the highest band (13-15). As well as making sure you address all aspects of the question, try to integrate some references to relevant historians/historical interpretations.

TIP: Copy and paste example question and the student answer you want to work on. Then, highlight your added sentences and paragraphs where appropriate, so I can see if you added either to existing paragraphs, and/or added completely new ones. Please do not use a faint highlighting color option as it is difficult to see.